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Why the giggle? It's cute, but irrelevant and unexplained.
I get why you put in the footsteps, but it makes it sound like you're outside....and you're supposedly in the gallery, it's just a strange combination of sounds. What if there was a sound of someone walking in a marble hall?
At times it is difficult to hear Shannon.
You can take out the "uh" when you forget Henrietta Maria's name.
All the "um...and like so ums" are cute....but you could cut those out too, it just gets a little long. I'm not sure if I was new to the musuem if I'd listen to the whole thing (especially if I didn't have kids or grandkids).
There are some definite volume problems with the kid after the so ummer. I couldn't understand what he was saying at all.
Why include Jan's question about the monkey's name? We haven't heard her voice before and it's weird particularly since Shannon repeats the question it doesn't seem necessary.
I think maybe the monkey's name could be Giles! :)
I'm confused cause I thougt I was at the end and then it kept going about the globe...I think there's some old clips attached to the end that need to be cut off.
Again, this was really excellent and a great way to deal with the information.
Thanks!
Comments
Great Job Ladies!
A few comments:
I think there's too much music in the begining.
Why the giggle? It's cute, but irrelevant and unexplained.
I get why you put in the footsteps, but it makes it sound like you're outside....and you're supposedly in the gallery, it's just a strange combination of sounds. What if there was a sound of someone walking in a marble hall?
At times it is difficult to hear Shannon.
You can take out the "uh" when you forget Henrietta Maria's name.
All the "um...and like so ums" are cute....but you could cut those out too, it just gets a little long. I'm not sure if I was new to the musuem if I'd listen to the whole thing (especially if I didn't have kids or grandkids).
There are some definite volume problems with the kid after the so ummer. I couldn't understand what he was saying at all.
Why include Jan's question about the monkey's name? We haven't heard her voice before and it's weird particularly since Shannon repeats the question it doesn't seem necessary.
I think maybe the monkey's name could be Giles! :)
I'm confused cause I thougt I was at the end and then it kept going about the globe...I think there's some old clips attached to the end that need to be cut off.
Again, this was really excellent and a great way to deal with the information.
Thanks!
Posted by: katie | February 26, 2007 11:26 PM